Bad Luck over the Summer
Just a few quick words before posting my story. Now I know normally I'm like super-humble about my ability to write, but this is different. Although I enjoyed writing this story and like a lot of things about it, it just feels off to me. I really feel I messed up somewhere in this, and I'm not sure where. It just feels sloppy or unprofessional. I don't mean from like a grammar angle either. I just feel like something is up with this one.

Basically, I'm really open to any comments or anything anyone has for me on this one.

Bad Luck over Summer Vacation
By Jappio
Part 1
Suzie hung up the phone, having finished ordering some room service.
It would be awhile until it was done though. She sat down on her bed,
kicking her feet, thinking of what to do next.
She had saved up some money so she could go somewhere fun for the
weekend. It being summer break between colleges classes meant it was
time for relaxation. Just her luck though, it was storming out that
night, meaning she had to stay indoors. She had dressed down to some
shorts and a tank top and was ready to relax the day away. The clothing
was old, but she thought they were comfortable and good nightwear. She
also had socks on to keep her feet warm.
Suzie noticed that she was low on ice, and figured she might as well
fill it up. She got up and grabbed the bucket and headed out the door.
Suzie didn’t mind too much that she was walking through the hall in
her night clothes. She wouldn’t have hit the town like that, but she
figured it was Ok since it was just a hotel and not many people were
around. She did giggle a little at the trough of being out in the hall
with only socks on her feet though.
When she got to the ice machine down the hall though, she saw the
‘out of service’ sign on it. She sighed and mumbled, “Just my luck.”
She wasn’t about to give up of course. She figured if she went a
floor up she could find a working machine. She entered the nearest
stairwell, and headed up a floor. She exited it, and she soon found
herself another ice machine, a working one this time.
Humming to herself, she made her way back to the stairwell, happy to
have completed her mission. She had both hands on her bucket of ice, so
she turned her back to the door and proceeded to push it open with her
rear end to get back into the stairwell. Suzie didn’t notice though a
loose screw on the door and it had snaked its way into a gap in the seam
on her shorts.
As she pushed her way through the doorway and began to turn and walk
away from the door, Suzie felt a tug at her shorts. It didn’t register
what was going on, she just felt resistance. She naturally just tried to
pull away from it, but since the heavy door wasn’t about to sway with
her, her shorts were quickly torn down their entire seam!
In a moment Suzie was left in just her tank top and bright red
panties. She had enough foresight to keep her screech quiet as she
crouched as if to hide. She looked down and saw just how bare her legs
were now with only her panties and socks below her waist.
Suzie held the ice bucket in front of the front of her panties as she
slowly stood straight up. She looked around and was thankful that she
was alone.
Suzie wasn’t too surprised something like this would happen; it was
typical of her luck to land her in situations like this. She felt she
was lucky enough though that she was still relatively dressed and her
room wasn’t far. She hadn’t seen anyone on the way to the ice machine,
and hopefully wouldn’t on the way back.
Suzie quickly walked down the stairs, not planning to show her
panties off to anyone. She could see and feel her legs were completely
bare, and the cold stair well reminded her of that as she head down to
her floor.
She stood in front of the door leading to her hallway, and she set
the ice bucket down. She tried tugging at her tank top, but the tight
material couldn’t be stretched nearly far enough to cover anything. With
her shorts gone, she regretted not having a bra on either. Even though
the shorts were really only a small bit of fabric, and she was showing
only a few extra inches of skin, she felt almost naked.
She took a deep breath and opened the door. She took a long look down
the hall. She didn’t see any other guests, so she picked up her ice
bucket and left the stairwell. Now as she passed door after door, she
knew she wouldn’t be able to hide and anyone could walk out and discover
She tried to not stare at the doors and think about anyone catching
her. Too many times in her life she had been seen undressed, and
although no one at the hotel would know her, she hardly wanted to be the
subject of anyone’s’ “what happened over summer vacation” stories.
Suzie was lucky to get to her room undetected. She set her ice down
and quickly tried to get into her room. Yet as she pulled at her door
handle, nothing happened. She tried and tried again, but the door
refused to open. It didn’t hit her right away, but she realized that it
of course wouldn’t open, she didn’t have a key!
She didn’t know why, but she somehow forgot her key. She had managed
to lock herself out of her room, and with her awful luck, she wound up
without her shorts on top of it.
She stood, trying to quickly think of something, anything to do. She
didn’t want to admit it in the end, but it seemed like she was out of
options. She would have to somehow make it down to the front desk and
get a new key for her room.
She felt vulnerable standing in the middle of the hall though, so she
made a dash back for the stairwell to try and think it over again. She
hated the fact she had to run away from her room, panties out on show,
but she reasoned it would be safer in the stairwell.
As she got close to the door to the stairwell, Suzie’s heart nearly
burst from her chest. She heard the elevator’s chime and heard what
sounded like its doors opening. No more than a few feet away, someone
was going to get out of the elevator, and see her. She would have
normally taken the time to check the stair well, but panic set in and
she just opened the door and rushed in.
On the other side, Suzie was lucky to be alone. She let the door close and she took a few steps down the stairs and sat down.
She rubbed her hands up and down her legs. She couldn’t believe
something like this was happening to her again. She couldn’t imagine a
situation where she could get out of this without being seen.
She tried remembering the lobby. She thought about ways to sneak up
to the counter, but she wouldn’t be able to hide from anyone on her side
of the counter. She stood and felt out the back of her panties. She
knew anyone would be able to see her pantied butt if she did this. Yet
there were no other options she concluded.
She gathered up all the courage she could, and began her descent down
the stairs. She had an agonizing five flights to think about what she
was about to do. She told herself to not stop though, that she had to
get it over with. She spent the last flight telling herself to not even
stop at the door, to just walk out of it and enter the lobby and get up
to the counter as fast as she could.
Her resolve wasn’t nearly strong enough though, and as she opened the
door and felt the air from the room flow through the doorway and across
her bare skin, she let go of the door and quickly scurried away from
it. She tried to collect herself, waiting wasn’t going to help she
convinced herself.
On her second attempt, Suzie didn’t run away. She made it out the
door and was in a small alcove attached to the lobby. Two elevators sat
on each side of her, and around the corner she knew was the front desk.
She could hug the wall and hope the counter was high enough to hide her
panties, but she knew that the front doors and the entire lobby would
have view of her. This also depended on there being no one at the desk
too. She didn’t want to risk peeking around any corners either, that way
she didn’t raise suspicion.
“Maybe if anyone sees, they’ll just think it’s a swimsuit,” she
consoled herself. She subconsciously adjusted her panties, to make sure
they were at least well adjusted.
Before someone could come across her standing in the elevator alcove, Suzie began to walk out,  right into the lobby.
The lobby was very well lit; in no way would anything be hidden by
shadows. Suzie turned right away so not to walk into the middle of the
room at least. She sighed in relief seeing no one standing in the lobby.
She also was happy to see the counter was indeed high enough to hide
her lower half.
“How may I help?” the girl behind the counter asked Suzie as she
walked up. Suzie didn’t know what to say, she wasn’t quite prepared to
actually talk to anyone.
“Oh, um… I was uh locked out of my room!” she said as she looked
around. She knew she was looking suspicious, but at any time someone
could enter the room and see her.
“Ok, do you have you ID on hand?” The lady asked. Suzie almost wanted
to comment on her lack of pockets to put anything in, but she wasn’t
about to flash her panties to the desk lady.
“I um don’t…” she meekly said.
“Oh well you can probably guess I can’t just give you a key to a room
with nothing to prove who you are,” The desk lady explained. Suzie
wasn’t sure what she was doing, but out of the corner of her eye she saw
someone walking into the room. It was two girls just a year or two
younger than her probably. Both stopped and looked Suzie up and down.
Before they could even react, Suzie looked back at the desk lady, not
wanting to know what they thought.
“Please, I need to get back in my room. Isn’t there something I can
do to prove it? Like the card I used to pay for the room ends in 1234,
and I’ve been here only two days now, and I just ordered some room
service!” Suzie said in panic, wanting to get out of there.
The lady at the desk started to type on her keyboard some. “Ok, I
suppose that will do. Just give me a moment.” Suzie was left waiting
there as the desk lady did some more work on the computer. Suzie dared
to look behind her. The two girls were gone, but a man in a business
suit was doing a double take as he came through the door.
Suzie quickly turned away from him, not wanting to make eye contact.
She began to blush, knowing her red panties weren’t hidden from that
man’s view. She subconsciously raised her right foot and rubbed it
against the back of her left calf. The soft cotton of her socks reminded
her how bare her skin was. “Hurry up, hurry up,” she pleaded in her
 “Ok, so long as you’re ok with the slight charge we’ll add to your
room’s bill, you’ll be all set,” the desk lady explained as she handed
the key out. Suzie quickly grabbed it.
“Thank you!” Suzie said as she immediately headed back for the
stairs. She made the mistake of looking to her side to see that the man
in the suit was still watching her. She almost screamed as she picked up
her pace.
Suzie was about to turn and enter the alcove to get to the stairs,
but when she saw a group of people getting off the elevators, she wasn’t
about to stay. She panicked and didn’t think to turn back. She went for
the first cover she could see, and that was the hallway that was in
front of her. She walked past the elevator alcove and was now in a
Suzie wanted to stop and wait, but she wasn’t sure if the people
would follow her. She looked down the hall to try and find a solution,
and that’s when she got an idea.
The door to the hotel’s indoor pool was not far from her. She did
before hope that her panties looked like a swimsuit. She could hide in
there and get a towel or something and then be able to sneak to her room
more safely.
Suzie made her dash for the room. She opened the door and was just
about ready to relax, but she saw that someone was actually in the pool
The man swimming turned his attention to Suzie. He must have not
thought anything was up, because he went back to concentrating on his
Suzie hadn’t convinced herself well enough her panties could pass as
swimsuit bottoms. She knew too well she was standing in front of this
man in her underwear. She also didn’t want to just grab a towel and
leave; he would know something was up. A normal person she thought would
probably be at the pool in a swimsuit to swim. She looked at the water
in front of her.
“Don’t worry, water’s not too cold,” the man said, trying to welcome
Suzie into the pool. He could tell something was making her hesitant,
but he didn’t know the real reason.
Suzie was thinking of jumping in, but she still had her tank top on.
She cursed herself for not having a bra, then it would be more
believable she had a bikini on. It would be silly to jump in with her
tank top on.
Suzie didn’t see much choice though. She had to pretend she was there
just for a regular swim, that she wasn’t running around the hotel in
her underwear. She took a deep breath and walked over to the pool edge.
She sat down and let her feet soak. The water wasn’t freezing, but it
was colder than she thought. She knew though she looked stupid sitting
there like that so she scooted forward off the edge and into the water.
That area of the pool was deep enough to fully submerge. She was
shivering as she came back up from the sudden cold. She saw the man had a
weird look on his face, probably because she was still wearing her tank
top. She had to come up with some excuse
“The water looked just inviting, I couldn’t wait to completely
change,” Suzie said, hoping the man thought she had her bikini top
underneath. The man seemed content with the answer as he went back to
his swimming.
Bad Luck over Summer Vacation
By Jappio
Part 2
Suzie wasn’t sure what to do; she hadn’t really planned on swimming.
She couldn’t get out right away though, and figured she might as well
also get some exercise and do some laps of her own while stuck there.
After a few minutes, Suzie was becoming worried she’d have to keep
going for quite some time. Not once did it seem the other man was
slowing down. It didn’t help her either that she was a little winded
from all the fear and adrenaline.
Suzie’s luck changed soon enough though when the man got out of the
pool. He began to towel off and Suzie knew she was close to being free.
She noticed as the man was getting packed up to leave, he kept
looking at her. Suzie was happy to see him leave, but the smile he had
as he looked back one last time told Suzie something was definitely up.
 Mere moments after he left, Suzie realized why he had been staring.
Looking down, Suzie noticed that her tank top was too light of a color.
The light faded pink color became quite transparent. Although not every
detail could be seen, she could see two darker circles with pointed nubs
at the tip of each breast. The man had been able to essentially see she
was braless under the tank top and could see her areola! Suzie wasn’t
able to hold back a screech as she crossed her arms over them, even
though she was alone.
Suzie refused to stay out in the open, essentially topless. She
pulled herself out of the pool so she could find somewhere to hide. She
had to tug her panties up though, the water was pulling them down. She
would have mooned the guy had he still been there probably.
Suzie saw that there were some changing stalls nearby and quickly
took refuge in one. With a mirror now facing her, she was able to see
exactly what the other guy probably saw. She knew exactly why the man
had been grinning. Suzie was essentially flashing him her boobs the
whole time.
Suzie peeled the shirt right off her body. She knew she couldn’t go
around in it like that, it had to dry. She placed it on top of the door
of the changing stall as she slipped her panties down and off. She
noticed a hook on the door and let them sit there.
Suzie remembered she had yet to get a towel. She wanted to dry off,
and wasn’t interested in squeezing back into the wet clothing she just
got off.
Slowly, Suzie opened her door and looked out. She made sure the door
covered her body, but she wanted to see if a towel was at least nearby.
Unfortunately for Suzie, the only towel she could see was on the other
side of the room. Taking about two steps out the doorway, Suzie thought
she maybe could run to it. She wasn’t so sure if her luck could hold out
long enough though.
Suzie’s attention was drawn away from her towel though when she
finally noticed something about the room. The wall that separated it
from the hall was almost completely glass! Suzie at that very moment was
revealed to the hall, and would be for quite some time if she did try
to get that towel! Suzie was also lucky to notice that out in the hall a
cleaning lady was wheeling her cart to the door to the pool. The lady
hadn’t seen Suzie yet, so Suzie was able to quickly get back into the
stall and slam the door shut.
Suzie held her breath as she heard the cart’s wheels squeak around
the pool area. Suzie didn’t have much reason to be worried, it wasn’t
all that odd to be naked in a changing stall, assuming she was actually
changing. Suzie though felt like she was doing something wrong, and was
still worried of being caught.
She heard the cleaning lady mumble something, real close to the
changing stall. Suzie wasn’t sure what it was about, but felt relieved
when she heard the lady start to leave.
Suzie gasped as she looked at the door to her stall however. She
noticed that her tank top that had been resting on the door was gone!
Suzie instantly realized it had to have fallen off when she panicked
before and slammed the door shut. It must have been on the floor. Suzie
slowly opened the door again to take a look out. She could see the
cleaning lady was leaving, but she didn’t see her shirt anywhere nearby.
Suzie began to think that the mutter before from the cleaning lady was
actually about her tank top! The cleaning lady must have taken it and
didn’t realize Suzie was there. Suzie’s attempt to stay quiet and hidden
was coming back to bite her on her bare tush.
Suzie was thinking of calling the cleaning lady back, but Suzie
didn’t have anything on. Even though it would help her stay covered on
her way back, she was too embarrassed to purposely expose herself to
her. The cleaning lady left, and Suzie was left with only her wet pair
of panties.
Suzie took a moment to come up with a plan. She still had to get the
towel, and all she had were the panties. She took them off the hook and
tried to wring them out, but they were still pretty wet. She slowly
pulled them up her legs. Again she stuck her head out of the changing
stall. The towel she planned on getting was still on the other side of
the room.
She knew that she’d have to run through the entire pool room, topless
in front of the hallway windows. She didn’t know what else she could do
though, so after making sure she didn’t see anyone in the hall, she
took off.
Suzie kept her arms crossed over her breast. She felt very naked now
that she only had on a pair of panties. She glanced to her side and
flinched. She could clearly see into the hallway, and even saw her
reflection on the glass. She knew she looked very naked, and she had no
way of hiding now.
Suzie got to the towel and quickly picked it up off the chair it had
been resting on. She started to try and wrap it around herself, but she
couldn’t figure out how. She was starting to worry that the towel
wouldn’t fit.
Walking through that door at the time was a younger couple. They took
one glance at Suzie and wondered what was going on. All they saw was a
girl wearing nothing but bikini bottoms trying to get a towel around
Suzie was surprised by them suddenly entering. She still hadn’t
gotten the towel on right, so the two got an unobstructed showing of her
bare chest. She was lost for an answer to the situation, so Suzie just
took off as fast as she could past the two people and out into the hall,
towel loosely held in front of her bare chest.
Suzie ran towards the lobby without thinking at first. She wanted to
get out of the couple’s sight, but soon realized she had nowhere to
really go. Ahead of her she would be out in the open lobby again where
even more people could see her. She stopped dead in her tracks between
the pool entrance and the lobby.
She knew she had to cover herself somehow. She looked back behind her
and saw that the couple was standing in the pool room’s doorway,
craning their heads into the hall to watch her. Both seemed amused by
her nearly naked state. Did they know she was a victim of a couple of
wardrobe malfunctions, or did they think she was some type of
exhibitionist? Suzie didn’t have time to think about it. The more she
stood and thought about it, the more time they could stare at her ass,
only covered by her wet, red panties.
Suzie hesitantly held the towel away from her chest for a few moments
so she could wrap herself in it. For a few moments she was at risk of
flashing anyone in front of her, but soon she got the towel around her
Suzie wasn’t pleased with the towel though. As she feared, the towel
wasn’t as big as she’d like. It managed to reach around her, but length
wise it didn’t cover all that she wanted. She could just barely get her
breast hidden, but this left the lower half of her panties on show. She
didn’t want to leave them out in the open, but again she had to try and
hope that people thought they were bikini bottoms.
Suzie looked behind her and was glad to see that the couple had
retreated into the pool room, probably thinking the show was over. Suzie
pulled and tugged at the towel now, wanting to see what she could do
with it. She felt self conscious about raising it too high above her
panties, but her shoulders were left very bare. It would be obvious to
anyone looking that she didn’t have a top on, or at least a top with
should straps. Maybe she’d get lucky and they’d think she had some type
of skimpy top on underneath.
Taking a deep breath, Suzie slowly walked forward toward the lobby.
She would have to make it up several floors now, dressed as she was. She
didn’t know how she would explain herself if someone confronted her.
Suzie spent as little time as she could in the lobby. The first thing
she did was turn and get into the elevator alcove. She was about to
enter the stairwell she had come from originally, but there was a sign
on the door. Somehow in the short time she had been on the ground floor,
the hotel had to actually lock off the stairwell for maintenance. Suzie
felt trapped now, not knowing what to do to get to her room.
She could have tried and find another stairwell, but that would only
prolong her journey. With her luck, she figured that would only lead to
disaster and more lost clothes. Although she didn’t like the sound of
it, this meant she’d have to ride the elevator.
Suzie pressed the ‘up’ button to summon the elevator. She tried to
calm herself, telling herself it wouldn’t be long till she could be back
in her room. Her heart began to race though as she saw other people
begin to gather in the alcove. Two woman and three men had all joined
her in the alcove, also waiting. She didn’t want to spend the elevator
ride with other people, but she didn’t want to wait for empty elevator
As they waited, Suzie couldn’t help but shy away from the group. She
didn’t want to be the one standing in front of the door, everyone else
free to stare at her from behind. She felt safer off to the side where
she could make sure no one was staring. Luckily besides a few glances,
no one seemed to pay her much attention. She was feeling very naked
though in just a towel and panties, standing out in the open in a hotel.
Suzie’s adventure looked like it would be coming to an end once the
elevator did arrive. After a few people got off and left, the others
started to enter. Suzie was last to enter and realized it was a mistake
to wait at the side. The walls of the elevator were soon covered by
everyone and their luggage, leaving only enough room for Suzie to stand
in the center. She did her best to will herself to stand still and press
the button to her floor. Sadly it seemed almost everyone was on the
floor right above hers, and would be with her the whole ride.
Suzie waited as the elevator went up its first few floors. Suzie
wanted to hide and be alone. She felt so nearly naked in the little bit
of clothing she had. She could see her reflection in the reflective
walls of the elevator, and could see a lot of exposed skin. Her bright
red panties stuck out too compared to her pale skin and white towel.
At the 4th floor, one of the men got off. He had squeezed
right around Suzie, and Suzie thought about the horrors if she had lost
her towel as she had to twist and turn to let the man through. Luckily
for her, she didn’t lose her towel. The next stop would be hers, and she
could get to the safety of her room before something did happened.
Suzie was left uneasy though when she heard the snickering of one of
the ladies behind her. Suzie didn’t know why, but she knew it was a bad
sign. She looked around her and noticed that the other passengers
averted eye contact. She was really worried now, knowing it had to be
something to do with her.
As Suzie had tried to stretch and turn to let the previous guest off
the elevator, her panties in their wet state must have slipped down.
Suzie hadn’t realized it, but for the last few second she had been
standing with her butt hanging out of her panties, which was easily seen
from under the bottom edge of the towel!
Suzie blushed realizing that she’d been mooning the other guests. Yet
before she could even move to cover, the elevator arrived at her floor,
and the doors opened to two more guests waiting. It didn’t take long
for Suzie to realize that meant that she wasn’t just showing off her
bottom anymore. With the wet panties down to her thighs and the towel up
to high, she knew that the two men in front of her could just barely
see what should be her most hidden body part! If it weren’t for the
panties keeping her thighs together, she’d be showing a lot more too,
but she fortunately was probably only showing off her pussy fur.
With all the embarrassment and adrenaline rush, Suzie wasn’t able to
think straight. Rather than pull her panties up to cover herself, she
instead tried to escape the elevator. Yet with her wet panties clung to
her thighs, she was only able to stumble a few feet until losing her
Suzie ended up lying on the ground, her panties wrapped around her
thighs and her towel pooled around her body. She was left nearly
completely naked for all these people. It was only a second she was on
show until she was able to stand again and hold the towel in front of
her breast. She also pulled the front of her panties up with her free
hand to hide that portion.
Suzie wasn’t about to stand there and let herself make a fool of
herself anymore. Yet as she turned and ran from the elevators, the
people still left standing there got one last view of her butt. Suzie
only managed to pull the front of her panties back up with her free
hand; they hadn’t gotten up above her backside.
Bad Luck over Summer Vacation
By Jappio
Part 3
Suzie didn’t have a plan on where she was going; she just wanted to
get out of sight. She was running through the hall with her panties
barely on and a towel just pressed to her chest. She had to get decent,
but she didn’t want to just stand out in the middle of the hall.
Out of the corner of her eye, Suzie noticed a lounge room. Every
floor had one, it was just an area for people to get together and relax
in. Suzie didn’t know if anyone would be in there, but it beat standing
in the hallway.
Rushing in, Suzie was relieved to find she was alone in the room. The
room was dark, curtains covered the walls and the lights were off. A
few couches lay about and the TV was turned off. Suzie dropped the towel
on a nearby table, happy to finally take a breather.
She finally noticed now that her panties were still hanging down in
back. Suzie laughed thinking it was a miracle she still had the panties
at all. She was finally on her floor, and she could finally get to her
room and relax for the rest of the night.
Suzie was still embarrassed by all the people that had seen her. She
hated the fact that her panties would betray her so much. She couldn’t
believe just how much pool water they were still holding. She hardly
wanted to trip on them again, so she slid them down her legs, planning
to give them another good wringing.
With panties in hand, Suzie heard a sound at the entrance to the
room. She couldn’t let herself be caught naked, not again! Suzie didn’t
think she’d be able to get her towel on, so she went for the next best
cover, one of the drapes. Suzie just barely made it beneath one as she
heard two people laughing as they walked in.
Suzie held her breath as carefully as she could. She moved as little
as she could. She had only been able to get in at the last second, so
she was uncomfortably pressed front side towards the window. Behind her
she could hear the two people, what sounded to be a man and a woman,
walk in and sit on the couches nearby. She tried moving just a little
but noticed that it moved the curtain just too much for her to feel
safe. She couldn’t believe that in so little time she was suddenly again
naked, and with people only a thin layer of fabric away.
Suzie hoped that the curtain was thick enough so not to show off her
silhouette. Suzie looked out the window she was up against and saw it
was indeed a lot brighter now than earlier since the clouds had
Suzie also noticed the predicament that she was in. The window she
was against was large and went as low as just a couple inches above her
knees. This left her whole body on view to the outside world!
Suzie tried to avert her eyes. She told herself she didn’t want to
know if anyone was looking at her, she wouldn’t be able to do anything
about it anyways. Yet her curiosity got the best of her and she looked
out her window to the outside world. She could barely see ground, so she
didn’t worry too much about anyone down there. Yet as she looked up,
she saw many windows and balconies. She stopped her wandering eyes as
soon as she saw two girls on their balcony.
The balcony was directly across from Suzie, but the girls thankfully
were looking away. The two were probably about her age, and they seemed
to be having a smoke break. Suzie quickly glanced around and was happy
to see they were the only ones out on the balconies. Suzie wasn’t about
to calm down much knowing that the two girls could easily catch her.
Suzie tried to slowly move away from the window, to at least turn
around, but she didn’t have much room. The slightest movement seemed to
move the curtains, and she didn’t want to alert the others in the room.
It took all her strength to not move from the spot. She felt so
exposed with her body pressed against the glass. She knew it would
probably look like she was doing this on purpose too! Suzie saw no other
options besides that though. If the girls in the other building saw
her, they at least couldn’t do anything about it.
When one of the girls turned their attention in Suzie’s direction, it
didn’t surprise Suzie when her eyes went wide. Suzie was also not
surprised when the woman started to point Suzie out to her friend. Soon
both pairs of eyes were locked on Suzie’s exposed body.
Suzie wanted to keep still as much as she could. She didn’t want to
keep exposing her body, but she knew the alternative would only lead to
more people seeing her naked. However, she couldn’t resist turning her
head away to avoid eye contact. At least the girls across from her
wouldn’t be able to recognize her.
Suzie wasn’t about to be spared though. Suddenly she heard the couple on the couch not far away speak up.
“Hey, what are these I’ve found?” she heard the guy exclaim.
“Oh put those down, you don’t know where they’ve been!” The girl said, giggling.
“That’s the interesting part though, who do you think left them? What’s the story behind them?” He asked.
“Some girls are like that I guess, maybe she was with her man and
just couldn’t wait?” The girl reasoned. Suzie was starting to worry what
they might have been talking about.
“Giving you any ideas maybe?” the guy joked.
“Unlike some girls, I’m not that desperate, I can wait,” the girl said seductively.
Suzie then heard what sounded like the two kissing. Suzie couldn’t
believe she was stuck naked in front of the window while the couple made
out on the couch. She wanted to tell them to get a room, but she wasn’t
about to reveal her presence or her body to them.
Suzie got lucky though when she heard the two get up. “Let’s get back
to our room,” the girl said. Suzie heard the footsteps of them leaving.
After a few moments of silence, Suzie was more than ready to get back
to her ‘clothing.’
Suzie had gotten two steps out of the curtain when she heard the
sounds of children running and laughing. Suzie quickly retreated behind
the curtain before she could be caught. This time though she faced away
from the window. It meant having her bottom on show, but it was better
than her front!
“Haha, can’t catch me!” said one of the children, a boy by the sounds of it.
“Slow down!” said the even younger girl that was with him. Suzie figured they had to be siblings probably.
This went on for a few minutes. The two kids seemed to have decided
to make the lounge room their play area. Suzie could just feel the two
girls on the balcony staring at her butt cheeks pressed against the
glass, but like before she was stuck.
Suzie then heard the sound of metal rattling nearby. Suzie wasn’t
sure what it was until she heard the little girls say, “let’s let the
sun in!” The little girl was at the chain that opens the curtain!
The girl gave the metal chain loop a tug and the curtain began to
slide open. It seemed in just mere moments it would reveal Suzie to
these little kids!
Suddenly the curtain stopped though, and even began to move the other
way. Suzie was saved!“Stop that, I want it dark! How else am I supposed
to be the monster?” The little boy said.
That monster just saved her from the embarrassment of being caught
naked by those little kids. Suzie’s heart jumped again though when
suddenly the curtain began to move again! “I want to see the sun!” the
little girl shouted as she again started to pull at her half of the
Neither child quit. The curtain kept moving back and forth. Every
time it seemed to get really close to Suzie, but then it would retract
away. Suzie held her breath, not sure what to do. She tried side
stepping away from the side where the curtain was opening, but she
didn’t have much room left.
The curtain was also having a different effect on Suzie. The rough
material as it glided back and forth was also rubbing against her
nipples. Suzie’s nipples were already partially extended from the cold
of the window earlier, and this friction only added more stimulation.
Suzie could hardly believe that in the middle of this whole situation
she was actually being turned on!
Suzie was now not only hoping to stay hidden, but to also keep
herself from moaning out loud. She was also hoping the ‘monster’ would
keep his den dark!
The brother was losing his battle for control over the curtain. The
little girl gave one tough yank on the chain and the curtain flew nearly
open. Suzie was probably just a few mere inches from being discovered,
but someone had come to her rescue. “Hey you two, we’re leaving, get
going or we’ll leave you hear,” Suzie heard a woman say, most like the
children’s’ mother. The children groaned, but Suzie heard them walk
away. Suzie was again alone!
Suzie didn’t have to move far to get out of her hiding spot. She was
happy to see no one around, and was even happier to hear no one coming.
Suzie yelped though when she looked to her side. She was still standing
in front of the window, and the two girls from the other building were
still watching. Suzie quickly shut the curtain and sighed in relief. She
could finally end this.
Suzie scampered to where she had left her things. Suzie found where
she had thrown the towel, but her panties weren’t where she dropped
them. Suzie held the towel up to her body while she tried to find her
panties. They were nowhere to be seen.
It then struck her that her worst fears were realized. The thing that
had caught the couple’s attention earlier must have been her panties
after all. Suzie wondered if the guy had taken them with him or
Suzie was now left with none of her clothing. All she had was the
small towel. Suzie tried to warp the towel around herself and hide
everything, but she knew it was useless. If she had the top of the towel
fastened right at her nipples, it left her butt half exposed and even
some of her pussy. If she lowered it at all though, it would mean she’d
be showing off her breast. Suzie settled for having the towel higher up
to hide her breast, one hand to hold the towel up, and one hand between
her legs. She knew her butt was sticking out from the bottom of the
towel, but there was no way to cover it, and she wasn’t going to risk
dropping the towel.
Suzie slowly approached the hallway. She knew it wouldn’t take long
to get to her room, but she was naked and didn’t want to take any
chances. She had only a small towel, and nothing else. She waited till
she was sure the coast was clear, and quickly ran down the hall.
“18, 17, 16…” Suzie mentally said as she ran down the hall reading
all the door numbers. She was getting closer and closer. Suzie slowed
down her run though as she suddenly realized something awful. She hadn’t
noticed right away, but the numbers all started with a ‘7’. As she got
to 708 she realized that she made a mistake somewhere. Her room number
was 808!
Suzie tried to think of how that could be. She remembered hitting the button for the 8th floor before.
It had to have been that the floor the elevator stopped on when she
got off was the wrong floor. The person who was out the doors when she
rushed out probably had summoned it.
Suzie suddenly felt even more naked. She wasn’t even on the right floor! She thought she was in the home stretch.
Suzie clutched her towel, worried about what this meant. She would
have to make it a whole other floor. She quickly took off down the hall,
not wanting to spend any more time like this.
Suzie was frustrated to see that the stairs were still out of order
at the end of the hall. This meant another elevator ride, but this time
without her panties!
Suzie took a breath and hit the ‘up’ button. Suzie immediately ran to
the side so she wouldn’t be seen by anyone who might be in it. Suzie
wasn’t sure yet if she could stand getting onto the elevator the way she
looked if anyone was there, but she tried to convince herself it was
only for a single floor, only a moment.
Suzie couldn’t stand the idea though. They’d see she had nothing on
under the towel, her butt would be on show, and knowing her luck she’d
somehow end up dropping the towel again. She couldn’t stand the idea of
being caught naked again.
Before the elevator could even get there, Suzie quickly ran towards
the stair doors. Suzie didn’t know what was going on in the stair well,
but she would rather take her chances in there!
Suzie swung the door open and got inside before anyone could walk out
of the elevator and see her. She made sure to ease the door shut once
she heard the sounds of people above her. She looked around, and besides
a few tools lying about and things, everything looked normal.
Suzie slowly walked up the steps. She hoped the people above weren’t
near her floor’s door. Suzie felt relieved when she made it halfway up
and saw no one by the door. Halfway up the last set of stairs, Suzie was
feeling like she would make it. The sounds of people weren’t far, so
Suzie took her time to walk slowly.
Suzie got to the top step of her floor, and looked around, up the
corner, to make sure no one could see the door. Suzie did see someone at
the top of that set, so she quickly backed away against the wall behind
her. It had been close, but it didn’t sound like she was caught. She
took a deep but quiet breath, trying to calm her heart rate. She wasn’t
only afraid of being caught undressed now, but also to be caught
Suzie heard the man at the top of the next stair set start to walk
higher up. This would be Suzie’s chance! Suzie began to head towards the
door to her floor when something suddenly held her in place. With a few
tugs Suzie realized somehow her towel was stuck to the flat wall.
Suzie tried to pull at the towel, but it wouldn’t budge. Eventually
Suzie pulled too hard and lost her grip. Suzie went forward, but her
towel stuck to the wall. Suzie was surprised to be naked, but even more
surprised to see her towel glued to the stairwell wall.
Suzie got up close to it and tried to pull. She then noticed that
where her towel was, was right where there seemed to some newly applied
paint. The workers must have just painted the wall with some arrows.
Suzie’s timing and luck couldn’t be worse. The paint must dry quickly,
and she backed against it just before it was done. Now Suzie’s towel was
stuck to the wall. Suzie didn’t want to stand there tugging at it all
day, and she didn’t want to tear the towel either. She had to escape
now, towel or no towel.
 Suzie made sure the coast was clear and quickly opened the door to
her floor. She just needed streak to her room, and she wasn’t going to
wait around. Without looking she flew into the hallway and took off down
past the doors. She tried to ignore the fact she was completely naked.
“801, 802, 803…” she mumbled as s he went be each door. She had an
arm across her breast, and a hand between her legs. She didn’t even look
around to see if anyone was around, she was too dead set on her goal.
Finally, after so long, Suzie got to her door. She would finally be
inside and find some cover. Suzie uncovered her breast so she could grab
the door handle, and pulled it to let herself in.
Yet nothing happened. The door wouldn’t open. Suzie tried a second
time, but still nothing. That’s when she remembered. Her only goal
wasn’t to get to her room, but also unlock it. Suzie patted her hips as
if to check her pockets. Then it finally dawned on her. Suzie had
forgotten her key somewhere!
Bad Luck over Summer Vacation
By Jappio
Part 4
Suzie fell to her knees. She couldn’t believe what she’d done. She
couldn’t believe that she somehow could forget the most important thing,
one of the whole reasons she ended up exposed to so many people. Suzie
looked around herself; hopeful that maybe she just dropped it. Yet the
hallway floor was bare, as bare as her body.
Suzie tried to think back. Tried to think when she last saw her key.
She remembered getting it from the desk. She remembered she had it when
she ran into the pool room. She couldn’t remember having it any point
after that. Suzie figured the key had to be somewhere there. Suzie knew
what this meant though, and she didn’t like it. She’d have to sneak all
the way down to the pool, and this time she didn’t have anything to
Completely naked, and with no other options, Suzie got up and looked
around for people for the first time in awhile. She was luckily alone,
but she wondered how long her luck could really hold out for.
Suzie quickly jogged back to the elevator and stairs. Suzie had to
get down there somehow. Suzie hoped that the stairs would be empty, but
after cracking the door them open a little, she could hear some voices.
“How’d a towel end up stuck to the wall Frank?” one of them asked.
“Don’t know Jimmy, probably some brat playing pranks on us,” the
other man said as he looked behind him. He could see Suzie peeking
through the door way. “Sorry ma’am, the stairs are closed for now.”
Suzie quickly closed the door. Luckily the man could only see her
head, but she wouldn’t be able to take that route. Suzie eyed up the
elevator doors. Could she really do it?
Without letting herself stop, Suzie pushed the down button for the
elevator. Suzie knew it was risky, but she had no options. She’d have to
just bare her body to a few people to get this over with as quickly as
possible. Waiting would only lead to more people seeing her she figured.
Suzie was more than relieved when the doors opened and no one was
waiting inside. Suzie stepped in and quickly pressed the ground floor
button. She didn’t want anyone riding down with her, so she figured she
shouldn’t hesitate.
Every floor Suzie held her breath, as the elevator descended.  Again
she kept an arm over her breast and a hand between her legs. She didn’t
want show any more than she had to. The closer she got the lobby, the
more her heart race. She knew in mere moments she could end up arriving
naked in what could be a busy hotel lobby. All around her on the mirror
like walls she could see her naked body.
With a ‘ding’, the elevator ended up on the ground floor. Suzie
wasn’t able to keep her eyes open as the doors slid open. After a moment
of silence Suzie opened one eye to look around. There was no one
waiting around by the elevators. Suzie couldn’t believe her luck and
quickly got out of the elevator. She could see into part of the lobby
and saw that no one was waiting around. She could faintly hear what
sounded like someone at the front desk.
Suzie quietly took steps towards the hallway. She knew once she
rounded the corner, whatever guest was at the counter could probably
just turn their head and see her scampering down the hall, completely
Suzie stopped herself from running once she got to the hall. She
wanted nothing more than to make it into the pool room, but she didn’t
want to create a scene. She kept a fast pace, but she wished she could
go faster. Looking behind her, she could tell she hadn’t been noticed
yet. Suzie was also glad to see the pool room was empty at that time.
Suzie was again surprised by her good luck when she finally got to
the pool door. She had made it to the pool without being caught! Suzie
didn’t slow down though, and quickly began searching for her key.
Suzie searched all around for her key. She didn’t see it in the pool,
and it didn’t look like she dropped it nearby. She didn’t have it in
the changing room either.
Suzie was worried she’d have to go back to the front counter. She
could picture herself standing naked at the lobby counter, explaining
why she was naked in their hotel, guests everywhere watching her.
Yet out of the corner of her eye Suzie noticed something. Sitting on
one of the tables nearby was a key card! Suzie rushed to it and picked
it up. She couldn’t tell if it was hers, but maybe the cleaner earlier
found it on the ground and put it there.
Suzie didn’t have long to celebrate. Before she could make her trip
back, she saw a man walking down the hall. He hadn’t noticed her yet,
but Suzie knew she didn’t have much time to hide.
Suzie didn’t know where to go though. The changing room was on the
other end, and jumping into the pool wouldn’t help her with how clear
the water was. With only a moment more to think, Suzie decided she had
to jump in the nearby hot tub.
Suzie was probably only a moment away from being discovered, but she
somehow made it. The man entered and didn’t give Suzie more than a
Suzie was glad she hadn’t been seen, but now she had to wait for him
to leave. She wasn’t about to just walk out naked past him if she didn’t
have to, she at least was hidden beneath the hot tub bubbles. She also
had her back to him, so he had little chance of seeing anything. Suzie
looked behind her and watched the man do some laps in the pool. She was
worried this guy might take as long as the one from before.
Suzie also began to try and plan her way back. She thought about
maybe finding a new towel to cover with, and began looking for one
around the room. Suzie was happy to see a small pile off in the far
corner of the room. She started to think she’d be able to make it.
Suzie was hopeful when she saw him get out of the pool after only a
few minutes. Suzie was about to sneak out of the hot tub to get a towel
as the guy left, but the man suddenly turned around and started to head
towards Suzie!
“So, what brings you to this part of the country?” The man asked as
he sat on a lounge chair nearby the hot tub. Suzie had just turned
around and was about to get out of the hot tub. She quickly sank back in
and rested her arms outside the tub so she could look semi-natural and
keep the rest of her body in the water.
“Oh umm… well… just on vacation,” Suzie said. Suzie then noticed a
funny feeling between her legs. When she ducked back into the hot tub,
she had sat in front of one the tub’s jets. Suzie wanted to move, but
didn’t want to risk raising suspicion. If she squirmed too much, the man
might notice. She knew with him so close she had a fairly large amount
of risk of being seen.
“From California myself. Here on some business. Seen much of the sites?” The man asked.

Suzie tried to stay still, but the feel of the jets was
something new and different to her. She could feel a warmth building in
her. The incident earlier with the curtain didn’t help either.
The man continued to make small talk with Suzie. Suzie was having a
hard time keeping up though. The jet’s effect on her was making it hard
to concentrate. Suzie was embarrassed just knowing what was going on,
that she was becoming so aroused while this man talked to her. She
couldn’t help it though, every time she tried to move away from the jet,
she would stop herself thinking that he might notice her nudity.
Suzie could tell she was approaching an orgasm too. She wanted to
stop it, but she didn’t know how. Her arousal was clouding her judgment,
so she continued to just talk to the man.
“You should really check out the national park right on the edge of town. It’s real nice this time of year,” the man suggested.
“Ohh- Oook…” Suzie muttered. She blushed knowing that half her answer
was a moan. Luckily the man didn’t seem to notice at all. Suzie knew
she couldn’t open her mouth anymore, she couldn’t hope to keep from
moaning out loud. She tried her best to nod her head to respond to the
man’s answers, but soon she was at the very edge of orgasm.
“Well, I better get going. Have to get some papers together before a
meeting tomorrow. Bye,” the man said as he got up and began to walk
Suzie was able to squeak out a breathless “Bye,” before being sent
over the edge. It took all her willpower to not cry out. The tub’s jet
had proven to be too much for poor Suzie. She was pushed into a powerful
orgasm, and if it had not been for fear of being discovered, she
probably would have made quite a bit of noise.
“Oh, the name’s John, yours?” The man asked as he turned around.
Suzie for a few moments didn’t even know how to answer the question,
she couldn’t even remember her name. She eventually managed to say
“Suzie,” and that was enough for the man to say his goodbye again, and
he was gone. Suzie felt incredibly lucky that somehow the man stayed
completely unaware that a naked girl was brought to orgasm right in
front of him. Suzie wasn’t about to complain of course.
When she got her strength back, Suzie pulled herself out of the hot
tub. She was finally thinking straight, and knew she had to get to the
towel. Suzie made a quick dash across the room to the piled up towels.
Suzie was even able to use her common sense and grab two towels. She
wrapped one around her chest and one around her waist. She was in too
much of a panic before to think of that

With key card in hand, and towels securely in place, Suzie was ready to finally make it to her room.
In no time Suzie walked into her room, she was astounded. She hadn’t
been exposed to a single person on the way up. She got a few weird
looks, but her towels had stayed in place.
Suzie walked to her bed, let her towels fall to the floor, and just
laid back on top of the covers. She stared up at the ceiling, smiling,
feeling good that it was finally over.
“Room service!” came a voice from the door.”The door was open and I…”
the man started to say before stopping mid sentence. Suzie looked up
and was shocked to see a man standing with a tray in hand, staring back
at her. He also seemed equally shocked. Suzie was spread out completely
naked on the bed, and he couldn’t take his eyes away. For a few moments
neither said anything.
 Suzie didn’t even get a chance to cover up; the room service man had
apologized and left before she could move her hands. It was just
Suzie’s luck that room service would show up at that very moment. On the
bright side, she was right on time for her food at least, and she was
pretty hungry.
The End
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